I don't recall you doing poetry on here before. I loved it. On a side note, who ever did that ink was very talented. All the lines are straight and the same size.
"Electricity races beneath my skin" such lively longing...
what's the inspiration for this one, Debs?
Very nice! I know how it feels to once more feel the divine return when there has been an absence. "called or not called, the god will be there" Delphi Oracle On a side note - thinking about getting some ink?
Ooh how funny! At first I thought you were blogging about Biden...as in VP...hahaha. Just got up too early.
Hi Dezzy -- Jeanne has nailed it! This poem is about spirituality. Yeah, okay, and some sex too.Hi Jeanne -- No, still not thinking about getting inked!
Any other secret talents? :-)
"Electricity races beneath my skin" What a great line! There is a profound poet in you.
I'm glad someone figured it out because I was all like, "Duh..."
Very poetic and figurative. Who are you reaching out to? Have a great weekend. Cheers!!
Hi Bobbybegood1 -- In my experience, it is the Divine who reaches out and calls our name, not vice versa. All we have to do is wise up and be open enough to hear and understand. Speaking as a dense person, though, I have found that's not always an easy thing to accomplish.
I liked this Debra. We do have to learn to be open and vulnerable enough to hear and see what is coming towards us.
I am so sorry that I haven't been by ~ thanks so much for leaving me this poem to let me know how you feel about it ... ;)
Good job..Have a great weekend Debra
you do have amazing talents... enjoy the weekend.
Wow!You are so talented, Debra. It is HARD to do poetry well.
i'm with willow - i think its about me. :) but either way it is just lovely. xx
Love it Debra! This is awesome!
Gets the heart pumping.
Hey Debra ;o) I just wrote you a long comment and it went away? I will start again ;o)Your poem is very powerful! I love it! You are very talented!I got a surprise phone call today, from our friend, "Robin". We started talking about you! She misses blogging so much. Robin didn't realize HRH passed away. She felt so bad! I told her not to worry, because you know, she is going through a lot right now with her hubby! She sends you lots of love!
Hi Magic Love Crow -- Oh, aren't you two sweeties? Hugs to both you and Robin!
Wow, I didn't know you're also a poet. I studied poetry but can't write any at all! Brava!www.saucysiciliana.blogspot.com
That is beautiful. I love a good, simple poem that gets right to the point. In such an eloquent way.
Dear Debra,This, my friend, was an electronic tonic. I also wish to thank you for your very kind, thoughtful comment on my site.In kindness,Gary
Wow. You lit a stick of dynamite in so few words. It's very evocative, sexy even.xoRobyn
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