Thursday 21 July 2022

Thursday Art Date With Rain -- "A Poem"


This week, Rain's creativity prompt is not for artwork but for a poem! In the past, I dabbled in writing poetry, but the Muse deserted me once I started this blog because my efforts at writing were directed to blogging instead.

Actually, now that I think of it, the Muse should have deserted me before I wrote the following particularly histrionic piece of satirical nonsense. Oh well, too late now. Here it is for your amusement.

the horror of it all

when I was young
and full of

Self-Conscious Angst

I used to think my situation was

Tragic

I have the soul of a poet
trapped in the body of a lawyer!

but today I'm older
and wiser, as these things go.
I now realize my situation is

Even More Tragic

I have the soul of a lawyer
trapped in the body of a poet!

pity me

[© Debra She Who Seeks, 2006]



Oh, Jean-Luc . . . I knew YOU'D understand!

42 comments:

Liz Hinds said...

Oh so sad! More poetry please.

kathyinozarks said...

good morning, great post-loved your poem too and Jean Luc had me smiling

Marie Smith said...

Love it! Brilliant!

Sixpence Notthewiser said...

Oh, poetry!
I'm so jealous of anybody who can write poetry! So pretty.

XOXO

Moving with Mitchell said...

There’s a Pulitzer in you. Or maybe it’s a Wurlitzer. But I love this poem. From what you’ve shared, I don’t think you ever really had the soul of a lawyer. Besides, I’ve read lawyers don’t have souls.

Tundra Bunny said...

Don't give up your day job.

Boud said...

This is SO GOOD!

Debra She Who Seeks said...

@ Tundra Bunny -- Too late! I already retired, LOL!

Lady M said...

Hee hee - the soul of a lawyer trapped in the body of a poet. I love it!

Christine said...

Good one Debra you are a poet!

Marcia LaRue said...

I spent 13.5 years typing up a whole lot of lawyer's words and, believe me, none of them showed any kind of a poetic bent!

DVArtist said...

Drama Queen indeed. LOL I do love your poem. The first meme is perfect. I hope life is really treating you well.

DB Stewart said...

If I'm being honest, ALL lawyers should have poet's souls.

Guillaume said...

I cannot write poetry to save my life.

Mike said...

Did you talk in rhyme in court?

Debra She Who Seeks said...

@ Mike -- No, I never had the nerve for that but there are many examples of judges writing all or part of their judgments in rhyme. Here's a link to a few American examples --

https://blogs.loc.gov/law/2018/04/poetic-decisions/

Mike said...

Now that's funny!

Adam said...

I would imagine unicorns would be naturally dramatic

Carola Bartz said...

That's a fun poem! I'd love to read more like this.

Gillena Cox said...

Amazing luv the switch of souls.
Happy Thursday. Thanks for dropping by my blog

Much💚love

Miss Val's Creations said...

Oh fun! You do have a way with words!

Breenlantern said...

You had me at Jean-Luc

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Joanne Noragon said...

Too bad you had to end it.

My name is Erika. said...

Nice poem...and I wouldn't worry about being too dramatic. What's life without a little bit of good drama in it?

Kirk said...

Your self-assessment won't hold up in a court of law. It's a funny little poem. Subpoena that muse!

Bleubeard and Elizabeth said...

Your poem is incredible. SO much better than mine, and so much more dramatic, too. I am in awe!

Heidrun alias EricaSta said...

Yesssss 🤣 I agree with Jean-Luc. We are great Fans by the way.

I enjoyed your artwork too.

roentare said...

You are so witty and clever with the poem or a light satire? I enjoy it very much

This N That said...

Well done..love your poem..Enjoy your weekend!!

NatureFootstep said...

lol, loved the first one. :) Sooo dramatic. :) :)

Anonymous said...

From Judge Judy to Captain Picard - you've covered the gamut. Lol!
Looking forward to your next drawring... :^)

Old Lurker said...

I think it is time for a sequel.

Jeanie said...

I still haven't been able to muster up a challenge in so short a time but I love how you took it on! Your poem is delightful! And thanks for stopping by my blog for Rain's date, too!

Andrea @ From The Sol said...

LOL ... smart and witty, you are indeed a poet trapped in the body of a lawyer and I am so glad that Jean-Luc gets it :) that makes it all worth while, right? Life is full of Drama so it's good to be able to make fun of it. Enjoyed this immensely ...

Andrea @ From the So9l

The Blog Fodder said...

Lawyers have souls?

Martha said...

Oh, Debra, you are a real hoot! LOL

Ur-spo said...

I like a good poem.

Busy Bee Suz said...

I LOVE your poetry! Bravo!

Rain said...

Debra, you are wonderful. The poem is great! I love how you presented it too! Clap clap!!! ♥♥♥♥

yellowdoggranny said...

you write gud..

Laura Morrigan said...

I have the drama and moodiness of a poet but not the grand words! XD

Rommy said...

You have the gift of an excellent sense of humor, which is the best gift of all.